A lazy old fish I might be
hardly swims any more
But you can't catch me
I'm to smart for your lure
I watch your hooked line
as it flows slowly down
Smiling to myself,knowing
I'll never be found
Eating popcorn and having
a good old time
Camouflaged way down here
and drinking some wine
A contest entry
- Picture contest by queen.
300 points, ended April 19, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Smooth Rhyme
Well Done. This poem is so funny and has a very slick rhyme pattern, a well deserved gold. -
lol well i want a glass of the wine! Fun and playful writing
enjoyed this very much. blessings always~ Trisha and congrats to you on the gold
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Thanks for the congrats and applause!
I guess u would have to use your imagination on how a fish would be able to drink wine...maybe through a straw! LOL
Thanks again and glad u enjoyed!!!
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Fish with attitude very cute, thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
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Thanks queen!
I liked his attitude 2...this was fun to write!
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