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Sad Fish

Am sorry that I am covered with spikes
I didn't mean to hurt you
Am sorry your scared of my eyes
Its just swolen cause of those tears that are blue

Am covered with acne spots
Criticised all the time
Even posted as a picture poem
guess am the murderer of the crime!

I promise I will hide

and never come back

you won't see me again

so me hurting you, you would lack

A contest entry

Picture contest by queen. 300 points, ended April 19, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

I feel sorry for that lil fish :'-(

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queen
April 19
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
lost poetix
April 19

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vague
... too much going on here. murderer of the crime? am covered with acne? scared of my eyes?

clean it up.
- bleulayette
  April 20
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  lost poetix
  well this poem is not about just how the fish looks like and stuff. the literal meaning of this poem is about a kid that been called ugly and been blamed and bullied because of his or her look. the metaphorical meaning is an ugly fish thats been called ugly and now it is speaking what is in its mind.the fish looks scary, it reminded me of those kids who get bullied at school, so the acne spots is the spots on the fish and eyes reminded me of me cuz i always have thick eyeliners lil kids at school and some stare as if i scare them. People treat murderers badly . well at schools kids treat ugly kids badly too , the ugly kids get bullied so badly that at the end they listening to their bullies and they agree what the bullies say to them. therefore what i mean by " murderer of a crime" is the fish surendering and started to agree with its bullies that the fish itself brought the ugliness upon it self and "crime" is being ugly. you see were i was going?