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Winter Moonlight

Frigid air surrounds the two
Small clouds of breath seem to suspend themselves
Cold wind against their necks
A heart shaped pendant she holds close to her heart
Opening it so they both see
The story of their passionate love
Under the winter moonlight

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option 1!

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  • greatperhaps
    April 19, 2008
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    this is a change... wow, something happy! and I like it! good job and good luck in the contest!


  • Zenda-Lokki gold member
    April 19, 2008

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    Beautiful

    A lovely piece written with soft passion. I loved it, thank you for entering it into my contest, good luck.