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Escape

So come with me,
Let’s go,
There’s nothing to lose.
We’ll pack up,
Leave this place,
And leave all our blues.
Start afresh,
Try again,
And find somewhere new,
And be content knowing
That it’s just me and you.

And be content knowing
That it’s just me and you.

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  • lightswitches
    April 19, 2008

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    I liked this one because of the great flow from start to bottom. It reminded me of songs like Fast Car by Tracy Chapman, and Tracy is awesome!
    Good job!


  • Fourthaxis
    April 19, 2008

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    And be content knowing
    That it’s just me and you.
    There is nothing like a bit of permanence in this ever changing world!
    Best of luck in the contest!