She’s a beautiful woman with full strawberry lips
large sensuous breasts, and the roundest of hips.
Her eyes are as blue as bright cloudless skies
with a devilish glint that often surprises.
They say that you don’t judge books by their cover
and this is so true of my “demon lover”.
She presents one face to the outside world
that hides her true nature where her passions swirl.
From her easy nature no one would guess
that behind closed doors she is my “Mistress”.
We spend our days working as most people do
but my nights are spent in loving servitude.
It is my pleasure to attend to her needs
and I am rewarded for all my good deeds.
I kneel before her and worship her feet.
I lick and I suck until each foot’s complete.
Each toe is taken in the warmth of my lips
before I’m allowed to move toward her hips.
I cannot ignore her soft moaning sighs
as my tongue gently moves up her legs to her thighs
until at her urging I’m guided by force
and am privileged to feast at her pleasure’s source.
Her hand pulls my hair, her nails digging in
I’m pushed deep within her and so I begin
to taste of her passion, a flavor so sweet,
and I’m pulled and I’m tossed until she’s complete.
Her back arches with pleasure, her cries fill the air
and I’m held tightly against her, caught in her lair
as she finds ultimate pleasure in her final release.
My face wet with her joy, I feel once more at peace.
I’ve found completion; peace deep in my soul
by giving myself to another’s control.
To be able to give, with no thoughts of receiving,
to just be myself with no need for deceiving.
Author notes
Hmmm you didn't say who the "slave" was so I thought it might be fun to take this "a different way"... And for those of you with unbridled curiosity, this is a fantasy... any similarity to my real life is purely coincidental and totally speculative (LOL).
Prompt: Picture
Photo Credit: Provided by DemonicQueen666
A contest entry
- Sex Slave for a Night - By Invite Only by Sweet Impatience.
1950 points, ended April 26, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sexy*Sexy Writes by Poetic Butterfly.
600 points, ended May 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Mmmmmmmm.......Fantastic write her!! Very hot indeed! What woman doesn't love to have her feet whorshiped in such an erotic way??? Thank you for your fantasy...It was much enjoyed
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Scorchin!
Flames lick my skin to remove items of clothing to cool this heated flush...Now if I only had the slave. Captivating write indeed. -
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Glad it fanned your imagination's flames (LOL). Thank you for the comment.
Ken
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Great write.... think you have captured the prompt really well mate...good luck in the contest..
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awesome!
its verry good! i enjoyed myself as if i was actually the mistress i relate to that woman! and cant help but agree that you certanly paint a good picture!
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Very Good Thx for sharing this
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this is one HOT fantasy I must say. great write all the way on this one.
DQ666
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Fantasy? HMM you have one hot imagination.
Good luck.
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Oh hell, now who needs that cold shower? I'll be right back lmao This was sooooooo descriptive and well, I should leave it at that lol WELL DONE sir!!!
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interesting...intriguing...makes mental note to self
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Ahem! This is fantasy at it's finest... I could even feel my cheeks blush hot as I read this... A very fine erotic piece, dabbling in the dangerous yet not way over the top... I think you should do well in the contest with this one! IMHO!!!
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Thank you for the comment. I'll take you at your word that this made you blush (LOL) which I'll take to mean that it had the desired effect
Thank you... I owe you one (read, comment, etc. LOL)
Ken
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