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Smiles

Grabbing brass rings
rope swing splashes
ashes twinkling into the night
righting a wrong
favorite song
humming birds and lady bugs
cool breezes and warm hugs
butterfly kisses
being his Mrs.

Are just a few things on my mind

Have a great day everyone

Author notes

My mind was sitting here babbling, so I wrote the babbles down.

I am living my dreams, and wanted to share.

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 28, 2009

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    wonderful read, wonderful flow of fymes in your poem. Grabbing brass rings and rope swings, remins me of another time. It was a pleasure to read.


  • xPlatinum-Lotusx
    April 19, 2008
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    Beautiful for babbles! Nicely done!