Finality
hits hard
when the
ground
rises up
to smack
you
in
the
face.
Making
the distance
from grace
a very
short
fall
Please tell me what you think
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we all need grace in our lives, and to each of us it may be something different...this could actually become a quote
one of my favorite quotes was from painter Claude Monet "More than anything, I must have flowers, always, always."...this speaks to me in the same sense
peace and hugs
Muddy
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I LOVE this! So philosophical, yet so in-your-face. It reminds me of tripping as you're walking across the stage to receive your high school diploma. Well, that's the image I get... but I know this goes much deeper than that.
You are definitely one of my new favorite poets. I can't wait to read more of your work!
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I know the feeling well. It gives the phrase 'things are looking up' a whole new meaning doesn't it?
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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