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Flight 113

 
 
 
{A Dark Short Story} 
 
 
Dedicated To Cathy Ann Davis

With love
Always
Wayne Leon 
xxx 
 
 
Flight 113

 
 
  
'So, it's all arranged,' she squealed, excitedly. Exactly a month from now
I'll be there Wayne, in England.  Oh, I just can't wait.  I've never done anything
like this before, or traveled so far.  Are you sure you're gonna be waiting at the other
end to pick me up?  I mean, if you have any doubts...?'
 
Wayne laughed, hardly able to get a word in edgeways. 'Cathy.  CATHY!  Hahaha. Calm down.
Everything's arranged my end too.  I can't wait for you to arrive.  I've got so many things
to show you. You know, places to go, stuff like that.  This will be one holiday you will not
forget in a hurry...'
 
'Now you got me even more excited Wayne. It's like my birthday and Christmas all rolled into
one.  I'm only bringing one case of clothing, 'cause I'm sure that I'll be buying some more
clothes when I'm in England.  Oh, and a whole lotta photographs too.  Pictures of Brandenburg, which is in Meade County.  Got pictures of the Ohio River an' all...'
 
'The Heartlands of Kentucky,' he giggled.  He had a mischievous giggle, even for a 'darkwriter'
where people expected him to be serious all the time. 
 
'Yeah, that's it Wayne. That's exactly what we call it. You've been doing a bit of research,' she giggled.  'Anyway, must dash.  There are a few more bits and pieces  I gotta get through today.  I gotta go.  Speak later, ok?'

'Will do Cathy.  Speak later.  Take care.'  Wayne heard the phone go dead on the other end and 
took a deep breath. Smiling from ear to ear.  Yes, she was finally gonna come.  After all this
time talking on the writing site - All Poetry, they had become like brother and sister. In fact,
to all intents and purposes, they WERE brother and sister.  She always called him the 'Brother
she never had and always wished for'.  And he?  Well, he called her the perfect Sister.  Someone
who he could rely on when the chips were down.
 
Oh, they could talk and talk.  But Wayne was eager to find out, whether they would still be the same people when they eventually meet?  Would they be as talkative then?  Would they freeze
and become really shy around one another?  There was no telling.  It was hell of a way for
Cathy to travel, only to become shy and tongue-tied. Hahaha, he laughed.  Imagine it..  All sorts
of thoughts ran through his head.  But putting all the negative thoughts to one side, Wayne got
on with the job of preparing his home for her arrival.
 
One month.  One month to go and she would be here.  Why is it that time moves so slow
when you're waiting for something.  Something so important - that WILL  become so important in your life.  Cathy had become very important to Wayne and he was determined that she was
going to enjoy every moment of her stay while in the UK.

He had one or two places in mind that he was dying to show her, but they could wait.  Anyway.
the days turned into weeks and soon the big day had arrived.  Cathy had rung Wayne nearly
every day, since she told him she was coming.  Keeping him updated on certain things.  Not
that he was complaining. Wayne loved to hear the sound of her voice.  He had another Sister and it was so great.
...
He got a text on his phone saying that Cathy was on the plane and was making her way
down.  Her plane was coming from Louisville Kentucky, and was due to land at Manchester
Airport around late noon the following day.  Which meant that her flight would probably be an 18 hour journey.  A long time to be on a plane.  Wayne surmised that she would probably have to take two planes.  One inbound, to get to her stop off point in the States, and another, from the airport she would have to get off at, in order to take another plane to the UK.  Hell, she will be so tired.  Not a moment to lose, he hadn't really been able to sleep much, probably because he was so excited that she would be coming.  Probably worrying about whether or not he would make a good impression on her.  And Wayne just knew that she was worrying about the same thing too.
 
But they were so happy to eventually be meeting, that all that, became a side issue. He stepped
into his car, giving his wife a kiss goodbye.  Excited at the thought that the journey back,
there would be a new sister in his car.  
...
'Would you like a drink Miss?'  The stewardess was young, blonde and slim and gave her
a welcoming smile.  She was carrying a tray of assorted soft and hard drinks.'
 
'I'm sorry Miss, but you don't happen to have coffee?  I could just do with a cup right
now.'  
 
The stewardess smiled. 'Of course, Miss, one coffee coming up.'
 
Cathy watched her as made her way to the back of the plane.  She still couldn't believe that she was on the way to the United Kingdom to meet Wayne Leon, her Brother, who she loved so very
much.  A warm feeling washed over her and a tingle shot through her body at the thought of actually seeing him, face to face.
 
Her husband had no hesitation about allowing her to go.  He had gotten to know Wayne very
well, and trusted him implicitly with his beloved Wife.  Of course, he had told her that he would
miss her terribly for the week that she would be away.  But, she had promised him that he had
nothing to worry about.  That the week would soon fly by, as time always does when your having fun.
 
He had also wanted to know where she would be sleeping?  Again, Cathy had told him
that Wayne had a spare room, in which he and his wife would put up visitors or family,
every now and then. It was no problem.  That seemed to calm him down somewhat.
Yes, he trusted Wayne, but at the back of his mind, Cathy was still a beautiful woman who
he loved more than life...
 
'Excuse me Miss?  Miss? Your coffee.'   The stewardess stood, waiting for some sort of response
which she eventually received.
 
'Oh.  Oh, I'm so sorry.'  Cathy put her hand to her mouth.  'I was miles away then.  Just
thinking.  Here, let me take that.'  Reaching for the cup she gently took it from the young
woman's hand. 
 
'Please, don't worry.  Is this your first time flying?'
 
She nodded, taking a sip of her coffee. 'Yes.  I'm very nervous.  I was just thinking about
my Husband and Brother.'
 
'Oh, they are not with you?  You're alone?'
 
'Well, it's sort of complicated. Hahah.  You see, my husband is back in the States.  He was
invited over too, by my Brother, but...he's scared of flying. Didn't want to come. Hahah.
So, here I am.  It will be the first time that I've met him.'
 
'Oh?  What do you mean, the first time that you have met him?'
 
Cathy continued, feeling herself getting flushed. It was so hard to explain. She just
knew that another person wouldn't understand.  But she tried to explain. 'You see,
my Brother is a writer.  A very very fine writer.  Oh, he hasn't been published yet,
but believe me, he will.  Well, we are not really Brother and Sister, we met on a site
called All Poetry.'
 
The Stewardess laughed, 'Oh, I'm so sorry Miss.  But, I know exactly what you are going
to say.  You see, I use that site too, when I get some free time to myself.  I know exactly what you mean about how people form families on there.  It is so good for that.  Of course
you have to be so careful, and a great judge of character to even think about forming any sort of relationship...let alone traveling all these miles to meet somebody you have never met.'
 
Cathy raised an eyebrow.  'No. I trust Wayne.  We have been there for each other every step of the way since we began talking.  There is something about him that...' her mind
wandered off again.'
 
'Hey, I won't intrude on your thoughts.  Forgive me.  Enjoy the rest of your flight.'
 
'I will,' Cathy whispered, barely acknowledging the stewardess.  Taking another sip
of her Coffee she placed the cup down and settled down to sleep.  Tiredness had
taken over and her body felt so relaxed and comfortable as she entered a deep slumber.
...
She awoke.  Confused.  Blinking.  Her eyes trying to adjust to the darkness that she now
found herself in.  'What... the hell?   Where's the plane?  Have we landed?  'HELLO!  HELLO!
IS THERE ANYBODY THERE!?  HELLO!'  Her voice echoed around the desolate lounge of the
airport.  Fear and panic began to grow within her, and droplets of sweat began to form and
drip down the back of her neck.  Suddenly, upon hearing footsteps, she looked up and gazed
into the far-distance.  
 
'CATHY!  CATHY IS THAT YOU!?  IT'S WAYNE, WAYNE LEON!'

'WAYNE!  OH WAYNE!' Dropping her bag she rushed toward him.  Feelings of joy and relief
washed over her as they held each other tight in the lounge.
 
'Come on Cathy, come and sit over here.  I think we both need to find out what's going on.'
 
'Wayne, I'm confused.  What's happened?'  I...I don't seem to...'
 
'...That's what I'm gonna try and find out Cathy.  I mean.  I don't remember
you calling me telling me the plane had landed.  I don't even remember making my
way down here and yet, I have the car keys in my pocket.  AND WHERE THE HELL HAS
EVERYBODY GONE!?  I mean, I can't even see any coppers?'
 
'Coppers?'
 
'Oh, sorry Cathy.  Yeah, coppers, you know, police?  We call them that in the UK, and a lot 
more besides. Hahaha.'
 
'Ah, right.  Well you know how I was worried about being tongue-tied an' all?  Well, don't think
that's the case now.  This is one hell of an icebreaker. Hahaha.'
 
Wayne gazed up.  'Hey, have a look at this Cathy.'  Grabbing a newspaper from the table
in front of them he looked at it and shrugged his shoulders.  'What the hell is this?'
 
'Er, a newspaper?'
 
'HAHAHA!  No.  I mean THIS!?' He pointed to the text upon the paper itself and watched
as Cathy recoiled in horror, throwing her hand to her mouth.  'Now, do you see what I mean?'
 
Taking the paper from him she studied it closely.  It wasn't like in any language she had seen
before.  The words seemed jumbled, disjointed.  'I don't like this Wayne.'  Her heart began
to beat that little bit faster and the palms of her hands became sweaty.  Especially when they
noticed that the other reading materials, and the billboards, all had the same strange lettering.
 
'Stay here Cathy.  I'm gonna see if there is anybody else around here.  Surely we can't be the
only two in the whole complex.'  He stood and was just about to leave her sitting there as
he headed for one of the shops within the airport lounge, when he heard Cathy screaming.
 
'OH MY GODDDDD!'  She fell to her knees, gazing out of the window in abject horror.
 
'WHAT THE FUCK!!!' Running back toward her, Wayne suddenly heard an almighty explosion,
and then they both saw a fireball hurtle up into the sky.  Pushed up by the force and power of
the crash. 'CATHY!  CATHY!  WHAT HAPPENED!?  TELL ME!  TELL MEEE!?'
 
Through hysterical sobs Cathy began to explain the best way she could. 'W...W...AYNE.
OH...OH...GOD HELP THEM....!'  Pointing a finger toward the window, which was strangely
still intact she howled in grief for those lost.  'WAYNE, THE....THE PLANE, IT CAME FROM
NOWHERE!  OUT OF THE SKY!!  OH SHITTT! IT JUST CRASHEDDDD!'
 
Walking up to the window, Wayne was struck by the absence of the emergency services.
Obviously, Cathy hadn't noticed this - not yet.  But Wayne did.  He looked left and right,
and couldn't see any signs, or hear any signs of sirens rushing to the disaster.  'Come on
Cathy.  There's nothing you can do now.  Come on honey.'  He reached down and held her
shaking hand. 
 
Tears streaming down her face she stood, hardly able to move.  It was as if
she had been rooted to the spot, such was the impact on her brain.   Nothing made sense
nothing at all.  'Wayne?  Why isn't anybody rushing to help those people trapped inside?
WHERE THE FUCK IS EVERYBODY!?  THERE ARE PEOPLE DYING IN THAT! AND WHERE ARE YOU
ALL!?  WHERE ARE YOU!?' 
 
The thick acrid smoke in plumes continued to shoot up toward the night sky, a sky that
was strange in the fact that there were no stars.  This was despite it being a cloudless sky.
'We need to get out of here Cathy.  Look. Listen to me.  CALM DOWN!'
 
'HOW CAN YOU BE CALM AFTER SEEING THAT!?  YOU KNOW, IT WAS A MISTAKE MY EVER
COMING HERE TO MEET YOU!  I THOUGHT YOU WERE DIFFERENT!  YOU'RE SHOWING NO
PITY AT...AT ALL!  TO HELL WITH YOU, WAYNE!'
 
'CATHY, LISTEN TO ME!  LOOK AROUND YOU!  DOES THIS LOOK NORMAL TO YOU!?
TELL ME TRUTHFULLY!?'  He raised an eyebrow, his hands on his hips. 'NO ONE IS GONNA
COME, BECAUSE THERE'S NOBODY AROUND TO COME!  WHERE ARE THE OTHER PASSENGERS IN HERE!?  IT'S LIKE WE ARE THE ONLY TWO ON THE WHOLE PLANET!  EVEN OUT THERE!'  he stabbed a finger toward the window, 'IT'S SO STRANGE!'  Walking away from her, he began
to move slowly back toward the window and gazed out.  'What the hell is this place?' he
murmured.  Looking down he felt a hand slip into his.
 
'Your right Wayne.  You are so right.' Dabbing her eyes with tissue, the two of them stared
out toward the wreckage of the jumbo jet.  The flames and smoke had all but disappeared
leaving a twisted mass of metal carnage upon the runway.
 
Cathy looked up toward the dark sky.  'Wayne,' she whispered, tugging on the sleeve of
his jacket.  'Wayne, there's no stars, and it's a clear night.  I...I..don't understand?'
 
'I don't either, but I am gonna find out.  Come on.  Let's check this place out.  Surely
we will be able to find somebody, or something around here to help us?'
 
Holding hands the brother and sister began to walk through the empty lounge.
'This is surreal,' whispered Cathy.  It's just unreal. I'm gonna have to follow you
Wayne, 'cause I haven't a clue where I'm going here?'  She held his hand even tighter, as
they entered shop after shop.
 
'You haven't a clue, Cathy?  Hell, the same here.  I haven't been to Manchester for
years, so I'm just as lost as you.  It's like the blind leading the blind here.  Every
shop we've been in so far is empty. '
 
'Yeah, I know, and every newspaper I've seen has those weird letters on them too. Look
I need a drink.  It's so hot in here.  Do you think you could do the honors Wayne?'
She gazed at a drinks machine in the corner of one of the shops they had entered.  Her
mouth had become increasingly dry and she was finding it hard to swallow now.
 
'Oh, I see what you mean.  The pleasure is mine dear lady.' Stepping up to the machine
he raised his leg and kicked it once, twice three times until cold cans of drink began to
fall down into the gaping slot below.  Scooping two cans up he tossed one to Cathy.
 
'Thanks Wayne.'  Catching it, she opened it up and drank, virtually gulping it down in one
go.  'I'm so thirsty.  Think I'll have another.'
 
'Well, there's plenty more there Cathy, in the slot.  Most of them fell down as I was kicking.'
 
She scooped up another and pulled the ring, drinking it down.  'Don't know where this thirst
has come from Wayne.'  Pausing, she gazed at him.  It was the first time she had really had
a good look at him.  He was everything that she had always imagined him to be, and she
liked what she saw.  'Listen, Wayne.  Er...about before, you know?  Earlier...?'
 
He raised his hand.  'Forget it Cathy.  All forgotten by me.  All I want is to get out of here
and...'  Suddenly he stood, cocking his head to one side.
 
Cathy's hairs began to rise and her heart began to beat a little faster.  'What?  What is it,
Wayne?'  
 
He placed his finger to her lips as he rushed back to her side.  'Shss honey.  There's something
not quite...'
 
'Wayne, you're scaring me.'
 
He looked at her.  A look of shock on his face.  'I know what this is.'  Grabbing her by her
arms, he looked deep into her brown eyes. 'I KNOW WHAT THIS IS!?'
 
'OH, GOD!  TELL ME WAYNE!  WHAT IS IT YOU KNOW!?  I DON'T LIKE THIS!  GET US OUT
OF HERE!?'
 
'DON'T YOU SEE CATHY!?  THAT WE ARE HERE FOR ALL ETERNITY!  THAT WE WERE BOTH
HEADING FOR THE SAME PLACE, MANCHESTER AIRPORT!  THAT WE WERE...!'
 
Cathy dropped to her knees.  A fear the like of which she had never experienced before
shot through her...'CAUGHT IN THE CRASH!  OH GODDDDD!'
 
'ONLY I WASN'T!  I REMEMBER!  I FELL ASLEEP, AT THE WHEEL OF MY CAR! COMING TO
MEET YOU!    I TOO WAS IN A CRASH!  OH FUCKKK!  OH FUCKING HELLLLLL!  WHAT'S THAT
NOISE!?'
 
They both ran toward the window and gazed in shock and horror upon seeing a jumbo
jet hurtling down from the sky, toward the runway, obviously out of control.  It smashed
into the ground and exploded before their disbelieving eyes.
 
'NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!'   Covering their eyes because of the blinding flash, the both of them
were flung backwards by the impact.  
 
Wayne struggled to his feet, pulling Cathy up by her shaking hand. 'DON'T YOU SEE CATHY!?
IT'S THE SAME EVENT BEING PLAYED OUT, OVER AND OVER AGAIN AND AGAIN!! IT WILL KEEP
PLAYING, REPEATING!  LIKE SOME STUCK RECORD!  AND WE ARE RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF IT!  THIS WORLD IS AN ALTERNATE EXISTENCE!  THERE IS NO ONE HERE BUT ME AND YOU!
ME AND YOU ME AND YOUUUUU!'
 
Wayne awoke.  'HELL WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT ALL ABOUT!?'  He began to sweat
upon thinking about the dream he had just had.  It was horrific and felt all too real.
 
'I'VE GOTTA RING CATHY!'  Grabbing his mobile phone he began to ring her number before realizing.  'OH, FUCK, SHE'S ON THAT PLANE! OH FUCK NOOOOO!'
 ...
Cathy awoke.  'Cathy what's up honey?' Her husband had walked into her room and
found her sobbing hysterically.  'HEY!  HEY!  WHAT'S WRONG!?  WHAT'S THE MATTER!?'
 
'OH BABY!  OH I'M SO GLAD TO BE HOME!  OH BABY I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!'
She squeezed him tight never wanting to let him go. Never wanting to part, wanting
to be a part of his life always.  
 
Managing to calm her down, her husband listened with rapt attention as Cathy began to
explain the strange dream she had just experienced.  'Oh, baby,' she whispered, 'it felt
so...so...real.'  Disturbed by the phone ringing, her husband reached for the receiver, and
answered.
 
'Hello, who is this please?'
 
'HELLO!  CATHY!?'
 
'Er no.  Er, is that you Wayne?'
 
Cathy raised an eyebrow and snatched the receiver from her husband's grasp.
 
'WAYNE, IS THAT YOU!?' 
 
'CATHY!  CATHY YOU WON'T BELIEVE WHAT'S HAPPENED!'
 
A cold shiver ran down her spine.  'What? Tell me...WAYNE!  WAYNE!!
WAYNE!  WHERE ARE YOU!?'
 
'CATHYYYY!'  The line went dead.  Cathy dropped the receiver.
 
It was sometime later, that both Cathy and her husband had heard the devastating news.
The airline crash had killed all on board.  There were no survivors...  Their blood ran
cold.  You see, Wayne had never meant for Cathy to be on that plane, foreseeing the crash
after he had died...in a crash of his own.  He never saw the lorry, until it was too late.  He had fallen asleep at the wheel.  He had been heading toward Manchester Airport, excited about
meeting his beautiful sister.   The car double-somersaulted through the air, before bursting into flames. 
 
Cathy never heard from Wayne Leon again.  His phone call had saved her life.  He had risen from his bed, yet not realized that he had passed away in a car crash, doing the things he normally always did when alive.  

She had been meant to oversleep, to miss her flight to the UK. But Wayne, he was trapped in an
alternate reality replaying over and over again, the doomed flight of 113...
 
 
 
 
Copyright
{c}2008
Wayne Leon Learmond
Flight 113
All Rights Reserved 

 
 
 
 

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  • Volfeng gold member
    June 10
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    oh wow this reminds me of my story, The bridge." creepy...


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 23

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    Wow what a story!!!!! I'm blown away by this... awesome write for your ap sister!

  • I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to comment this. I have come back and forth to read it though and I have to say I really enjoyed it... this was just amazing. I love what you've written here for Cathy. It was extremely well written and pretty intense. great job!!!
  • Cathy sent me this link, and I am so glad that she did. this is one powerful story.. I felt chills as I read this. this is one incredibly story that you have written. thank you so much for the opportunity to read this. definitely going to bookmark this. awesome write.

    kat


  • Lady Altheia
    April 21

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    Wow, that is an awesome story. I don't think that really happened. It is an incredible story. Thank you for sharing.
  • Oh my gosh!!! this scared me to pieces..lol..
    I adore this dark write, a fantastic journey!!
    However, I do not want to fly anytime soon!!..lol
    Many blessings
    ~A~


  • Warrior-Eagle
    April 21

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    That was Amazing.
    It felt so real, it was just amazing.
    That's all there is to say.
    I love the everything about it.
    Great job.

    ...Simply Me♥
  • Cathy sent me the link to re4ad , so here I am, I like the concept of the story, I like the idea of it all, but, it does become a bit hard to follow mid way where one has to go back adn read again, but over all a nice story, Still you need to left allign if you are ever going to be a published writer lol...


  • LittleMoon silver member
    April 21

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    Brilliant write, what a movie it would make as well. Because it was so descriptive and packed with atmosphere you could see it all like on a movie screen. Very well told.

  • Dienush Greeters member
    April 21

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    Oh my gosh!!! That is SO creepy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And it's night here too... the right atmosphere. Arghhh... this is very believable (I mean, due to the style) and I love it how you build the suspense.


  • Amber-Nicole
    April 21

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    O MY GOSH!!!!THIS IS SOOO INCREADIBLEY AWSOMEEEE!!!THERE'S NOO WORDS TO DESCRIBE THIS!!!
    SOOO AWSOME!!!

  • Tattboyspet silver member
    April 21

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    thanks for the link Cathy


    lol - Wayne not having a sense of humour?!?!?!
    NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Cathy KNOWS you will be published and I'm waiting impatiently to buy your books and tell EVERYBODY I know that I KNOW this writer and used to read his earlier works!!!!
    No need to worry about the strange writing Cathy - Wayne will guide you through it

    DAMN Wayne, that's no way to treat Cathy!!!! How can you put your finger to your lips and tell her that there's something that's not quite ... sheesh - you better believe you'll scare her!!!!!
    noooooooooooooooooooooooooo ... Wayne, that was AWFUL!!!!!!!
    Don't like the ending to this one ~shaking head~
    NOT AT ALL!!!
    As with your other dedication Wayne, you have outdone yourself! Your dedications are always so personal and they get into the person that you are writing for - excellent work my friend!!!!

  • Kalamina
    April 20
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    Wow, this was intense. Not really a poem, but the dialogue was really well done. Great job!


  • craftyangel43
    April 20

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    This was so awesome Wayne...I enjoyed every minute of it. So emotional and full of imagery it kept me on the edge of my seat. I love every word. Thanks for such a wonder piece of work.
    Hugs,
    crafty


  • sunshinegirl
    April 20

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    OH MY WORD!!!! My Beautiful Twinsy sent me this link, and I am soooo glad she did!! WOW!! This had me on the edge of my seat, and my heart was racing! This is sooooo good, and the images are spectacular!! I love every word in this one!!!


  • TizMoi
    April 20

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    AWESOME

    Wow!!!!! What a brilliant story indeed Wayne. Lost for words, caught up in the emotion of how it would be for meeting up and all the imagery. What a story teller you are indeed. Cathy is a wonderful person and you sure as heck have a great AP sis there.


  • azlyn gold member
    April 20

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    O.K.....YIKKEESSSS!!!! I have these premonition dreams on a consistant basis so this totally creeped me out my friend!!! Wonderful detail and emotion in this...thanks for making me a nervous wreck!!!LOL!

    Love~
    Az



  • Tam gold member
    April 20

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    OH MY WORD...

    this is INCREDIBLE penning...
    I mean...this is GREAT...
    very well done, sir! the storyline is truly captivating and left me breathless...
    I love Cathy so much...
    oh I'm bookmarking this one...
    WOW...you can write...
    I am so blown away right now I'm almost speechless...
    Blessings! Tammy


  • libithina
    April 20

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    BRAVO !!!

    This was great the build up to the meeting with a wonderful other from AP...I felt the excitement and was excited too..understanding the feelings of trepidation as the 'meet' drew near.. wonderment and worry if everything would go according to plan....and then I felt as if I too was caught in the whirlwind of suspense..captured as the reader, wanting to know more...what was happening...panic flood...Just outstanding Wayne bet Cathy is thrilled with this...it would be lovely if you could meet...steer clear of Manchester Airport though lol and flight 113 Big Hugs Lib x x applause, applause, applause

  • daviscth silver member
    April 20

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    I knew this story would be a hit with everyone Wayne. Stephen King look out!
  • What a work on this one Wayne! You are quite the story teller. I liked the imagery and the emotion conveyed in this! thanks!!


  • malmadre gold member
    April 20

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    Reading this, I had flashbacks of watching 'The Twilight Zone' loving the mystery and the unexplained. I was hanging on every line... Great storytelling!

  • word20dragon
    April 20

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    Great Write

    Very vivid very sad. I will admit I cried it tugs at your heart strings. Question did this really happen? It is written with such emotion. If this did happen and don't want to talk about it I would understand why? Keep writing,Keep living, Keep loving.

  • wow wayne this was amazing so awesome!! This was the best ever!!! I absolutely loved this!! One of my favorites, especially with two very awesome main characters!!
    You are amazing!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 20

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    What an amazing story, of love, of courage, and of thoughts on how special you two mean to each other.
    Brother and Sister...
    Really kept me in my seat
    Julie


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    April 20

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    Wayne, this is the best short story I have ever read of yours, it was dark, gripping but at the same time had a softer side to it. I'm glad that Cathy enjoyed it, although the thought of flying maybe the last thing on her mind at the moment.
    You have managed to incorporate everything that is needed to make a good story...well done.

    All the best

    Love
    Sue
    xxx


  • kool k
    April 19
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    this is so good ive herd so many stories just like this and this one is the best.
  • This is truly an amazing story! I loved it! I know Mom loves it as well. Knowing her she might print it out and scrapbook it. She always loves little treasures such as this. Great job!
    Crystal


  • daviscth silver member
    April 19
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    My darling brother, you've made me cry.... you got killed then even in death managed to save me..... I'm speechless, I really am. This is such an amazing story!!! I'll treasure it forever and ever. I loved the flight number, Very clever to use my birth date like that. Wow, I just don't know what to say, I'm so happy with this. It's such a great honor and you mean so much to me.I'll read it at least a million times. I love you!!!!


  • onesugar silver member
    April 19

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    Being on the receiving end of one of your stories I know how meaningful and special they are...as this one is too. You really do have a heart of gold, you always do wonderful things for your friends and family here on AP.
    This was a magnificent write. You could feel the events and the emotions as they unfolded. I read it quicker, wanting to get to the end with a lump in my throat hoping that against all the odds they would actually meet and this would just be some sort of bad dream. which it was, it was so sad that Wayne died before they actually met. This is a stunning write for your AP sis and a loving and thoughtful thing to do. A real pleasure to read. Intense and beautifully dark. Love ~sugar~ xx

  • The best! The best! The best!

    As you can see from the verdict, it's self-explanatory. You are an amazing writer, Wayne!


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    April 19

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    Applause-Applause-Applause!

    oh great, now i'll never ever fly upon an aircraft
    again!
    This was brillantly done, we were just captured by
    the intensity of the verses.
    we could hear it coming, but you took a spin on it..
    and twisted us completely!
    that's gonna hurt tomorrow....
    if one...does eventually arrive!
    loved it...what a great story!
    ears/Seattle


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 19

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    awww wow wayne *hugs*
    this is soooo sad
    i hope ur okay
    but lovely write here
    are you having bad dreams?
    sigh *hugs*
    well, wonderful write and keep it up
    stephanie

    love you
    xxxxxxx


  • Sacred Ground
    April 19

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    Wow! All kinds of emotions are running wild for me right now. This is brilliant writing, to say the least. I was surprised that Wayne died before meeting her, though. I also thought that you taking the time to write for a particular person is so suave and beautiful. This really is a wonderful story. BRAVO!!
    ~S~G~


  • ennovy silver member
    April 19

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    Masterful Write......

    This such a loving thing to do is write a story for someone. Only it made me sad that Wayne died before they could meet. But love the fact that his spirit is up roaming about; which make it a beautiful dark sad tale...Write on Wayne.......novy

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