Spiraling against the customs and traditions
all intelligent persons don't exhibit their sense
Some may try to make it with all honesty
but all are not received in the right perspective
Jains as a community will behave like nude seers
because their form and formations are followed
strictly according to their ancient scriptures
But some times insane people also behave so, abnormally
as they don't posses valid senses in their walks of life
Appearance and demeanor make no sense with ascetics
and en robing saffrons also wont help in many ways to some luxurious seers
Author notes
Male Nude: Does It Offend You?
A contest entry
- Male Nude: Does It Offend You? by LilyAngel.
650 points, ended May 2, 2008, 9 entries
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Very Good
This is a unique entry in the contest, and quite a thought-provoking one at that. I love the way you try to bring in so many social references and conclude with the ascetic's point of view. I can see a very mature and seasoned mind behind this work. Keep up the good work that's capable of inspiring others. Thanks for entering and best of luck too
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