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rockin' rain storm

Authors name ~ bon cassandra (formerly rockerchkpoet
Age ~ newly 16
Genre of poetry ~ whatever the heck i feel like
Collaborations ~ a couple
How many other round contests have you entered ~ 3
How often are you on AllPoetry ~ constantly
who has been your inspiration to write ~ ummmmm, my muse? 
Your likes ~ Bon Jovi, chocolate, sunny stuff, my clarinet
Your dislikes ~ Bon Jovi bashers, salmon patties, dirty stuff, the losers on the drum line 
Why are you auditioning ~ because Char told me to and partly because I want to

My name is Cassie.  I'm weird.  I'm stupid, annoying, ugly, and paraniod.  I have a low self-esteem.  I like socks.  I'm in love with nature.  I think rain storms have a way to be beautiful.  I'm still questioning love.  My name is Cassie.

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4121163

'how to smother a poet'

I tuned off the one lightbulb
dangling from the popcorn ceiling
  [nothing to illuminate,
    only thoughtless poetry
    taped on peeling wallpaper.]
No thoughts to inspire, except from the ones that
pulled the sea out of my eyes.

Sit.  Stare.  Good girl.
leash around my abilities
like a shock collar to my soul,
zap when I attempt to laugh
    [slow development of teenaged mind,
    body is faster]

memorized verses slowly shiver
creep creep creep down my spine;
click of popcorn ceiling lightbulb
sun explodes,
ink smoking like a cigarette, numbing killer silence
for the pen is mightier than the sword.









~~~

A contest entry

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 19, 2008

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    hehe its short simple but to the point and why would I hate it lol. a few people have put that I made them enter >.> im not that bad lol