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No More Flowers!!!!


Cover

Roes are Red
And your nose is black and blue,

Inside

I never loved you
so hears another bruise
from me to you.

 

Never again

Sundesigner  

Author notes

for all the woman who have to deal with crap from there boyfriends..

A contest entry

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  • FallenAngel09
    April 30, 2008

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    I thank you for your entry into my contest, it is appreciated. even though I do like this entry, it has refused to adhere to the rules of my contest and, as such, I must ask you to change it so that I can actually judge it.

    Your Host,
    Tiphanie


  • KayJay
    April 19, 2008
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    Funny and scary! Good write.
    Ken
    Critique: You have an extra "a" at Line 2 (inside).


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    April 19, 2008

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    could also be for those damn wife beating husbands... give them a little taste of their own medicine.. anyway great write... good luck in contest...


  • badddgirl
    April 19, 2008

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    Nice touch.....

    for all the woman who have to deal with crap from there boyfriends..


    Nice job, thanks for your entry!