The Sails flapping in the wind!
With my puppy my friend.
Little sea-gulls flying high!
High up in the sky!
Waves are rolling in the water,
like a bed sheet for a daughter!
Rocking back and forth,
Going north!
Author notes
i do sail in the summer and spring on lake Erie cause i live in ohio!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like this poem, I think that it needs a little bit of work to make it perfect, but its not bad. I am going back to read more. so keep writing
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It was really cute hehe
Thanks again for the feedback on my poem
And if u ever need to talk
Im here -
great!
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Nice poem!great!
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