One last kiss before I say goodbye,
One last kiss before I leave this world behind,
Please just one more
Before I can't have one anymore
Love me Sweet
From your head to your feet,
That is my desire
Before my life must retire
One more time can our lips touch
Before it's all too much
For my heart to bare,
For my lungs to breathe this polluted air
One last time will you say those words
So I can be sure
Even after I'm gone
That you'll still think about me even though I'm so flawed?
One last kiss before I say goodbye,
One last kiss before I leave this world behind,
Please just one more
Before I can't have one anymore
Author notes
I always thought about writing a poem like this since last year when I had...um...some difficult thoughts dealing with death...if you know what I mean..? n_ñ;
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This is so heart-wrenching!
I love it, though.
It flowes well, even though...it is a bit rough. The rhymes seem a little forced.
But other then that, it's lovely.
Excellent, hun. =] ^.^
~S~
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omg that is sooooo good! that touched my heart really deep. it reminded me of some really tought times that i made it through
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A beautiful piece with such longing for a loved one to remember and to hold the memory dear.
Love it
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pretty good
i really like how you ended it
and your rhymes
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I know what you mean. I really like this. It's so beautiful and filled with meaning. Love you lots!!
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