I won't rest till your safe
In my arms again
Winter comes and sets in snow
The things I've known are gone
I can't stop pacing round the room
Until your back in my arms
Safe and sound
Where nothing can hurt you
Safe in our own world
Nothing can touch us
Safe in my arms
In our own world
A contest entry
- Weekend Contest - Enter Any New Poems by Metaphorist.
600 points, ended April 20, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Why so far away? by MalevolentDesire.
400 points, ended May 15, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a short piece, and even though its short, its also full of emotion.
This is a very nicely flowing poem, and I liked it a lot.
Thank you for entering, and I wish you luck. -
Aww. This is very sweet. Thanks for entering.
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wonderful poem. displays emotions nicely. nice work!
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