The Twirling flower in my hair!
Pink and rosey I do not care!
Pink Blossom in my hair,
spinning with me everywere!
Twirling flower, oh so fine!
Little flower is mine!
The Flowers smell is soo good!
It smells better than some wood!
Precious flower is my delight,
now it falls off out of my sight!
Author notes
freckle central??????? WEIRDO!!!
The piture reminded me of a flower spinning!
cricket for the other contest
My Ap name Rosethorn1
For another contest
I like this poem because it ryhems and i am bad at ryhming!
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This is an awesome poem. I love the imagery because I can actually picture the bow you speak of. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Beautiful! I love the imagery and flow. I love flowers because they are apart of nature and I'm a nature nut! Lol! Thanks for the entry and good luck!
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This is really a great poem!
I love flowers...I live in Hawai'i and if you wear a flower behind your right ear (over your heart) it means your heart is "taken" you have a boyfriend or husband. Over your left ear means you are available.
In the case of little girls (under 15) you wear them in the middle!
Write on! Thanks for entering.
*PEACE*
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I love the beat of the words. its fun to read. i love it!
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love it!
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like it
I really like this poem. Another easy to read poem. Keep it up. Very nice!!
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i ♥ this poem!!!!!! especially the 4th stanza!Totally awesome. Nice write.
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awesome!veery creative!
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