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My Destiny

Hours pass, slowly, time ticks past
Every minute consumed with thoughts
Of you, of what is to come, of a lot
How to slow them down, erase them
The answer is unknown, never to come
Trapped in this circle of thoughts
Never to be free again
My Destiny

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  • Kari gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    That is not your destiny. You will be free again! Never give up hope on anything Em or I will hunt you down!

  • Velvet-Darkness
    April 21, 2008

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    tragically wonderful

    What a deep and thought provoking poem. I absolutely love it. There is such a sadness in it though. Maybe I just smoked 2 much. Such amazing word choices. I loved the flow, nice and smooth. Great work as always. Keep writing and I will keep reading.