Two thralling eyes, unlatched,
Attractive and unmatched,
Reveal, no strings attached,
Signs seeking to respond
In many ways beyond
Eternity, beyond
Restrictions, to true bond.
Author notes
pic : Phillippines Tarsier
http://www.bohol.ph/article15.html
Background valium and acetic acid (35x)
http://www.nikonsmallworld.com/gallery.php?
http://www.flickr.com/photos/kenilio/119935758/
Chocolate Hills, Carmen, Bohol, Philippines
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God that picture scared me but good job
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I can't see the picture for some reason, but I was just writing a poem that included Ruby lips so when I saw this I had to read it, lol! nice write!
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Excellent to be so short. I love the phrase "twinned surprise" for some reason.
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That creature is definitely different looking. lol. Great use of colors to make the reader really feel the words. Thanks for entering.
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Excellent
Considering your title, did you by chance write this cool piece in the "Twilight Zone?" A little more information about the "Twilight Zone", can be found at this address: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Twilight_Zone
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a good response to the source material! The second stanza is particularly powerful
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LOL what a wonderful picture prompt,
'dreams beyond beyond'
I expect it does with eyes like moonstones!
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