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Beyond Beyond

  

Two thralling eyes, unlatched,       
Attractive and unmatched,           

Reveal, no strings attached,          

Signs seeking to respond             

In many ways beyond                 

Eternity, beyond                      
Restrictions, to true bond.           

Author notes

pic : Phillippines Tarsier
http://www.bohol.ph/article15.html

Background valium and acetic acid (35x)

http://www.nikonsmallworld.com/gallery.php?



http://www.flickr.com/photos/kenilio/119935758/
Chocolate Hills, Carmen, Bohol, Philippines

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  • God that picture scared me but good job
  • I can't see the picture for some reason, but I was just writing a poem that included Ruby lips so when I saw this I had to read it, lol! nice write!

  • detrohutt
    June 29
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    Excellent to be so short. I love the phrase "twinned surprise" for some reason.

  • Metaphorist silver member
    April 20

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    That creature is definitely different looking. lol. Great use of colors to make the reader really feel the words. Thanks for entering.
  • Excellent

    Considering your title, did you by chance write this cool piece in the "Twilight Zone?" A little more information about the "Twilight Zone", can be found at this address: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Twilight_Zone

  • a good response to the source material! The second stanza is particularly powerful

  • LOL what a wonderful picture prompt,
    'dreams beyond beyond'

    I expect it does with eyes like moonstones!
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