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Abyss

s/h/a/t/t/e/r/e/d dreams
b|r|o|k|e|n ♥
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    y
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          g
            tears
w.i.s.h.i.n.g. for everythingtobealright

>>GRABBING<< hopelessly to save your mind
h~o~p~i~n~g for things to work out

Watching your life
      S                                      t
        I                                a 
          N                          o
            K                      l
                    and        f

        A        W        A        Y

blinded by the   
                    t
                      e
                        a
                          r
                            s

Mute from
          !!!!!SCREAMING!!!!!

G<>R<>A<>S<>P<>I<>N<>G
Hoping
b/r/e/a/k/i/n/g down

Nervous B#R#E#A#K#D#O#W#N

Slowly,
        slowly

F
  a
    l
      l
        i
          n
            g
                into the
                            @@ABYSS@@

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  • Nicotine Eyes
    April 19, 2008

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    Wonderful.
    Thanks && Good luck.