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w.i.s.h.i.n.g. for everythingtobealright
>>GRABBING<< hopelessly to save your mind
h~o~p~i~n~g for things to work out
Watching your life
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Mute from
!!!!!SCREAMING!!!!!
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Hoping
b/r/e/a/k/i/n/g down
Nervous B#R#E#A#K#D#O#W#N
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slowly
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A contest entry
- ::>Dirty Pretty by Nicotine Eyes.
300 points, ended April 28, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think of the formatting? Anything I should change??
Comments
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Wonderful.
Thanks && Good luck.

