i awake to start the day
i got somewhere to go , but it's oh so far away
should i walk or should i ride thats the question that i ask
as go to grab my keys ,but sees there is no gas
so off to the stop where i go to spend my change
when i'm startled by a noise coming from a passing train
damn i think cause i feel i dropped my money
so now it's back to walking just tring to get there
maybe it's a cab i'll call
but no money for the share!!!!
A contest entry
- QUICKIE, ENDS SUNDAY by TheRoughDraft.
380 points, ended April 20, 2008, 9 entries
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It flows quite well for a rhyming poem, so congrats on that! I think maybe a little more punctuation would be better. Nice lighhearted poem though
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