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[ cold white metal on a plain tile floor ]

cold white metal on a plain tile floor
refrigerating the silence
a hum of a thousand drones
nothing inside
but spoiled milk
and room
      for nothing more

A contest entry

deep in the rabbit hole, how long have i been gone?

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  • Angelflower
    May 1, 2008

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    This was really interesting.. it was short and thought provoking... Well done.. I wish you the best in this contest..

    Angel