I thought we could be friends, I guess I was wrong,
It hurts too much, my feelings are too strong.
I can't stand watching you love her, so I long from afar,
I'm slowly falling apart, and you're slowly breaking my heart.
I said we could be friends, it just hurt so much,
I couldn't stand watching you, as you two would touch.
Now my heart's breaking, as I long from afar,
I'm slowly falling apart, and you're slowly breaking my heart.
A contest entry
- Lines of Love by DarkLotus4Life..
300 points, ended April 25, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Amazing poem. I could really feel the emotion in it and I can relate to it. I love it
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wow this reminds me of one of my friends right now. good job!
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I really like your poem, nice rhyming and the poem is very realistic. Ive been there and this sounds very familiar, easy to connect with. thanks for the read and good luck!
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