Like the yellow color of the sunset
that fades away
into the deep pink of the sunset
you lit the way for me
through each day
You are my sunlight.
Like the soft fragrence of rain
upon a roses petals
we were ment to be together
You are my rain.
Like the single rose
that catches your eye
in a beautiful garden of flowers
I picked you out of
the crowds of chaos
You are my rose.
Author notes
Freckle Central
I hope it isn't too lovey dovey for your contest, I am trying to write happier poems and this is what came to mind when I saw the picture.
A contest entry
- Awesome Pic Prompt!!!!:):):):) by The Green Elf.
523 points, ended April 29, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is your interpretation?
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Beautiful.
Lovely! What a wonderful poem. It's very special and cool. Well done!
Have a nice day!
Lana
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it is sooooooo not too lovey dovey, it was too awesome!!!! Congrats on a super poem!


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Thank you so much!
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I like it. It's definitely refreshing to see you writing some happier stuff. Not that I'm one to talk really, but yeah. Great job, I love it!






