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You are my rose

Like the yellow color of the sunset
that fades away
into the deep pink of the sunset
you lit the way for me
through each day

You are my sunlight.

Like the soft fragrence of rain
upon a roses petals
we were ment to be together

You are my rain.

Like the single rose
that catches your eye
in a beautiful garden of flowers
I picked you out of
the crowds of chaos

You are my rose.

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Freckle Central

I hope it isn't too lovey dovey for your contest, I am trying to write happier poems and this is what came to mind when I saw the picture.

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  • Lanasaur
    March 17

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    Beautiful.

    Lovely! What a wonderful poem. It's very special and cool. Well done!
    Have a nice day!
    Lana
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  • The Green Elf
    April 19, 2008
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    it is sooooooo not too lovey dovey, it was too awesome!!!! Congrats on a super poem!


  • pulpyblood-dripping
    April 19, 2008

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    I like it. It's definitely refreshing to see you writing some happier stuff. Not that I'm one to talk really, but yeah. Great job, I love it!