I’ll love you forever,
We will never part.
Together forever.
Words straight from the heart.
These words I told you,
And I meant what I said.
But the fire has died down,
The affection is dead.
“She said it’s over,”
Your best friend told me.
YOU COULDN’T DO IT ON YOUR OWN?
You broke my heart, you see.
The heartbreak was too much,
I won’t be hurt again.
No more late phone calls,
No more girlfriends.
I can’t believe you hurt me.
I thought our love was true…
How could you do this?
WHAT DID I EVER DO TO YOU?
But I‘ve lost you forever.
Even as a friend.
And one lesson you’ve taught me,
I’LL NEVER LOVE AGAIN!
Author notes
I chose #2
Written December 13th, 2003
A contest entry
- MaNy ChOiCeZ by echomywurdz.
300 points, ended January 23, 2004, 183 entries
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VERY NICE!....I feel your pain its a very nice poem but i do hope you love someone once again. I kind of know how you feel even though i havent beem hurt like that yet i have hurt someone that loved me and i was sorry that i did...but great job with your work your one of the only guys so far that i have read poetry from that can rhyme
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