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To a Love from a Beloved

Darling,

There is something I want you to know.
I feel this incredible feeling--It's love!
And I know that you love me too.
It's in the way you smile, the way you hold my hand,
your arms about me, holding me tight.

Every time I am down I know I can count on you.
Every day you amaze me with something you say,
or something you do. I can't believe I am so
lucky to have you in my life.

I want you to know, my love, that I will
always be here for you. Anytime you need me
don't hesitate to call no matter the hour of
the night. I'll do my best to return the
love that you have shown me.

I only hope that you feel as lucky as I do.
I wish I could love you the way you
love me. I can't wait to hold you
in my arms again, to see you smile,
to kiss your forehead.

My Darling, I am yours forever. And I'll love you til the end.

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  • No longer in use
    November 5, 2008

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    Comment Number Seven

    And just when I was about to wonder who this man is his name appears before my eyes. And i'm shocked it's not my name. lol Joking... I have no wonder who you are and who I am.... yah... whatever.

    Anyway. This is splendid. A true emotion of love shown in the words that you have showed to all to read. Well done.

    And I'm not sure if you can tell but my randomness and crazy blithering and thoughts are nearing it's end.

    I'm grasping for words that aren't there anymore.

    I may have to reconvene at another time.

    But let's see what happens.


  • Nephlim
    April 22, 2008

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    Blah why, this poem is awesome! Nathan's lucky! I don't see anything blah about it Just very real and sweet
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly