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Chained To You

 
 
I sometimes look at this many ways,
One of which that I set you free.
Could that be taken the other way,
Freeing not only you but also me?

I just don't feel this fits,
I don't know, it may be true,
But I don't think you understand;
You see, I'm still hooked on you.

These chains that cut into my skin,
Holding me here so damn tight;
I know how to sever them,
But I refuse to put up that fight.

I may be free to do as I will,
The chains may no longer bind me,
But I'll always be chained to you,
I guess I'll never truly be free...

Author notes

"You are free to sever the chains of fate that bind you..."
[[Used that quote]]


Might add more to it later, dunno. Whatever.

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  • Shadow Darkstar
    April 20, 2008

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    Damn him.
    Damn him, all to Hell.

    I'll see to it he was a "wonderful" welcome....


    ♠ Your Rising Phoenix ♠


  • phantomwriter
    April 18, 2008

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    I like your interpretation of the quote. Using it in terms of a relationship is interesting and dynamic, and appealing to many people. Good write, best of luck in the contest