Butterfly, flutter
Spread your orange wings and fly
Bring the world a smile.
Author notes
Alright! Haiku contest! This is 5-7-5.
Haiku of the day for 4/18/2008.
A contest entry
- THE WILD HAIKU by Swan song.
1259 points, ended April 19, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Mania 3 by Celticmoon.
800 points, ended May 27, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Changing Seasons, Nature Calls! by iamlost.
600 points, ended April 24, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you REALLY think or face certain doom!
Comments
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Lovely images here though I thinkif reqorked a bit you could make this an even more powerful piece of imagery that would be breathtaking. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you.
Blessings
Bel
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This has a good quality to it but at the same time holds that darker side of meaning too
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This is sweet and beautiful, I love all of it! Especially the nice rhythm in the second line, and how the first line sounds when you say it out loud. And I like the philosophy of the third line. So once again, I like it all.
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This is lovely with a nice philosohpy Well done and thank you for entering.
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