Cover your emotions looking for the perfect way,
in subtle and imperfect vibrations,
incline me the shock to allay,
in broken ways to new aspirations.
Bridges to nothing, nothing of bridges,
ways without guides, aurora, out of tune boundless,
don't feel beating, vibrating, wailing blitzes,
in so many ways of profoundness.
Jasmines of your breast don't bloom,
does not even sing lark in soul closely,
weeps for willow in tormented gloom,
in time long tears flowing a lonely.
Author notes
Lines of Love
A contest entry
- Lines of Love by DarkLotus4Life..
300 points, ended April 25, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A great rhythm to these words. again great imagery...the pain expressed very well through great language. :D *hug* *rose* Cindy
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That really was amazing. I like this piece very much
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I can see the emotions ..they are honest and not fabricated for the sake of poetry..they are coming from the direct heart..and one can be touched by these wonderful sentiments..well done...
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Wow, amazing. Just amazing!
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