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eagle flies

in the sky
an eagle flies-
fish flails in talons

Author notes

flails is one syllable just incase your wondering

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critique please, a real one

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 4
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    Beautifally Done

    ♥ kathraina


  • Swan song gold member
    April 19, 2008

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    This is very vivid in imagery and I have seen it once in my life time for real. Magical moment captured in words