my world is when i see you smile
when your arms around me and your love makes it all worth while
i love your caring personality
you really want to feel everyone's pain and try to understand
you're also a leader who likes to take command
your face makes me want to melt in the snow
when i'm with you i truly wish i didn't want to go
you are what you are
and bright like a shining star
if you only knew
what's its like a world without you
A contest entry
- Lines of Love by DarkLotus4Life..
300 points, ended April 25, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you think and do you like it?
Comments
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this is a great piece. I could feel the emotion in it. good job
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yes..if a heart is turned into the pen..what it would write..? Indeed a poem..which is here..I love the honesty of the words... here..well done....
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