Her magic emerges in dreams
as memories of her lover
manifest as flowers
in a bowery of imagination.
Different scents arise
forming essences of delight.
embodying the designs
of her mind into
a brilliant display
of floral pleasure.
Author notes
Picture Prompt provided by Photobucket, Author Unknown
A contest entry
- - Free Your Imagination - by Desire.
700 points, ended April 22, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So ethereal.
"Tag"
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Beautiful. Nice smell.
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Your intrepretation
of this poem would help clarify this one. I'm guessing, the dream images of a lover appearing in the abstract form and smell of a flower? I like this.
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You are quite correct Dark Otter..the memories we keep in our mind manifest in our dreams. When they are pleasurable they transform into our fantasies, of many things out of the ordinary.
Thank you for the comments.
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...wow! it makes me inspired ma'am,,thank you and congrats!
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Beautiful!
Perfect for this prompt!I love it! I want this picture too!
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Floral perfumes bring so much pleasure
with this write
Spirit soared and was soothed and caressed with this gentle 'essense {of} delight'
Beautiful
s s Lib x x
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Floral Pleasures
This piece tugged at Spirit and for some reason~
I was getting phrase: Flowers in the Attic...
being shown the book...
and this may be wild...
but Danielle Steel~
the Author...something about her books too
for some reason: getting words: Quit Smoking...
being shown~ Christopher Reeves
but also Superman for some reason
These lines grabbed and pulled~
as memories of her lover
manifest as flowers
in a bowery of imagination.
Different scents arise
forming essences of delight.
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Beautiful compliments to each other of words and picture. Good luck with this
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That must be a wonderful fantasy she is dreaming of
Wonderful entry - Good Luck in the contest
Tang
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Beautiful
Great description here. The first four lines really resonated with me. Nice work.
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