April 10 2008
What to do I'm so confused
Stuck here all alone
All alone to sit in the tears that I've cried
But I am not giving in
I'm looking for the way to happiness
The way to no more pain no more hurting
And I won't give up
Cause I need to change
I have to find my way
I know I have to be strong
No doubt about it
I'm tired of all this pain
Cause it feels like I can't do anything right
Feels like theres no need to live anymore
But I'm on my way
Finding my way to that something to make me happy
Now that day is finally here where I don't have to hurt anymore
Where I don't have to be in pain
Cause God took all of that away
And no more will I ever turn back to who I once was
I'm protected forever and always
God has me under his wings and he's my shield
No more will I have to worry
And no longer will I be alone cause I know he is watching me every step of the way
Please Tell Me What You Think..........BAD OR GOOD
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God has me under his wings and he's my shield
No more will I have to worry
And no longer will I be alone cause I know he is watching me every step of the way
My fav. stanza that conveys a beautiful message! That's my girl, you be strong now 'n keep the faith. Because no matter what else may change in your life...God is and will ALWAYS Be GOD! He loves you 'n I love you too!
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This is wonderful! I like how it starts out one way and in the ent turns totaly around! Great write once again!
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GOOD! Very nice. It isn't too dark, where it gets gory. And the ending is very good.
"God has me under his wings and he's my shield
No more will I have to worry
And no longer will I be alone cause I know he is watching me every step of the way"
Nice work
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