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Love is a word wrapped in feelings

a mist of expressions

in crisp white

 

rhythms

 

     that change

 

             that pulse

 

move and mold

beyond borders of silent

 

ride the word

     ~love~

feel the depth

    ~love~

 

in rustic brush strokes

along vacant streams

hidden in occasional echoes

…a natural free state of being

 

feel between the lines of broken notes

go beyond borders of silent grace falling

in reflections of solitary embraces

 

slide into true balance…

a confrontation with [self]

stripped down to bare words

 

naked strands

slow dancing with poetry

defining each passing moment

in curves and creases

 

helplessly

 

          hopelessly

 

 good, bad or ugly

soul chemistry expects the unexpected

 

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Love is a word wrapped in feelings

a mist of expressions

in crisp white

 

rhythms

 

     that change

 

             that pulse

 

move and mold

beyond borders of silent

…in the breath of a breeze

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4/18/08 

Author notes

Prompt4: Do you agree that love is more than just a feeling? That true love continues to love, even when it's hard? No mushy pieces here. Think more in terms of doing something for others just because you care.

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  • tara wilson gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    "naked strands

    slow dancing with poetry

    defining each passing moment

    in curves and creases"

    beautiful - I also like the 'rustic brush strokes'

    lovely poetry..I think your lines breaks & use of the page work well here,...congrats


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 26, 2008
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    This is very beautiful. Thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


    whisper


  • albymyheart gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    Great poem on love. You worked the form well to enhance the impact.

  • vertigo beat
    April 19, 2008
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    -beyond borders of silent
    silence?

    well done.


    • zochit2me gold member
      April 19, 2008
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      No I meant silent not silence.
      sometimes I actually know what I mean

      Thanks for the comment though...short and sweet.


  • Tam
    April 19, 2008

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    this is beyond lovely...

    truly beautiful penning Becky...
    this is begging for tin...
    your ink always drips with such grace...
    Blessings! Tammy

  • Suzanne Dia
    April 19, 2008
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    Love is all we need.


  • aliceramone
    April 18, 2008

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    this is beautiful poetic justice...great soft flow that drips love...love the "silent grace falling in reflection of solitary embraces"...a great piece.

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