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all I want

all I ever wanted
all I really need
I will do anything for you I will bleed
when I am down
you bring me up
all I want is your love
anything just to be your everything
all I ever wanted
All I ever need
for you I still bleed
a slight of hand
a touch of hope
I still need you
no joke

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  • DesolatELifE
    May 10, 2008

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    My favourite line is 'anything just to be your everything'. I love having favourite lines in poems that are filled with great lines =)


  • DarkLotus4Life.
    April 23, 2008
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    good poem, but you should have read rule 3. '4-12 lines', this is 14 lines.