If one will endure the conflict of contradiction.
And patiently go through the dark tunnel years.
One can then build into a future fine features.
If one can rise to the occassion of his own thought testing.
Sway with the wind of opposition; where you seem to be in flux.
That's the time when the door will begin to open and voila!
Staying with a thing through the season change's climaxes,
Will pay off most handsomely - but hang in and time will tell.
Forward motion is the key to where ever one tends to go.
If the seeker's way was too easy - then what will be gained?
His path must turn crooked, rocky, faulty, salty, haughty.
He must paint the building five hundred times and still flow.
He must endure instructions that fly past his own reasoning.
Seaming to be all but, yet, his determination will sustain him.
And the reward of the seeker will always out-wrap his obstacles.
A contest entry
- Doubt by azure85.
600 points, ended May 3, 2008, 16 entries
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A poem of endurance, as you go through what life brings you, good and bad.
and the reward of the seeker will always out-wrap his obstacles.
Wonderful ending, thank you so much!
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a good poem, it is a tricky road sometimes yes, but we have to keep the feet flying fast in reason and rhythm and smile.
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All that hahaha a some donuts
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