Within these vessels.
Belief in him to hold,
to strengthen when needed
came undoubtedly, naturally,
always at my side.
My love for him
(at his weakest now), needed to grow
my time to help him find the light again, is here.
I trust he, no we’ll get through this
as within these vessels beats life and love,
and so we are sheltered.
Author notes
TEN LINES
using the following quote:
"Within this vessel beats life and love; and so I am sheltered" - Unknown
SO I sort of changed the prompt to an us/these type feel..Hope you don't mind
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A contest entry
- JUST TWO DAYS TO REACH 1000 ENTRIES !!!! ( BE A PART OF THIS RECORD BREAKING CONTEST ) by Alex Hex.
300 points, ended May 1, 2008, 526 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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To feel sheltered within love for someone is just the best feeling!!
This speaks of such confidence in the love for each other... passionately strong is this write!


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very beautiful written poem good luck in the contest


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Thank you so much
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