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Within these vessels.

Within these vessels.

























Belief in him to hold,
to strengthen when needed
came undoubtedly, naturally,
always at my side.

My love for him
(at his weakest now), needed to grow
my time to help him find the light again, is here.

I trust he, no we’ll get through this
as within these vessels beats life and love,
and so we are sheltered.


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using the following quote:

"Within this vessel beats life and love; and so I am sheltered" - Unknown

SO I sort of changed the prompt to an us/these type feel..Hope you don't mind

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    To feel sheltered within love for someone is just the best feeling!!

    This speaks of such confidence in the love for each other... passionately strong is this write!


  • Entwining Beauty
    April 19, 2008
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    very beautiful written poem good luck in the contest