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First Time

Sheltering her secrets yet to be explored
his smoky eyes were drawn with passionate wonder.
Both inhaled the magic of this moment
as together they would trace a world to both yet unknown.
Softly each stroked with pleasure that place they would become one
and together curved into each others desires.
As beating hearts almost exploded in urgent resonance,
they discovered a haven of treasures where butterflies spiralled in tune.

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Prompt - Dark Curls

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  • Tam
    April 19, 2008

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    oooohhhhh...

    I love this write...so rich and smooth...
    very well done pretty poet!
    congrats on the HM...
    Blessings! Tammy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 19, 2008
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    So deeply creative and beautifully drawn... x


  • TwoFacedPsycho
    April 18, 2008
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    This is most definitely beautiful!