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Love Travels

Missing image

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Resting in the embrace -
pulsation of unending
emotions - released
to a dream that lives
in the here and now...
I breathe not scarcity but
the abundance of life in
each and every space of your
cells. You, travelling  -
to find the nest within mine.

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  • celadia
    June 10, 2008
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    Sexy and another trophy, fantastic, this is so clear, this piece.


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    June 5, 2008

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    very fine tender image

    This speaks the language of universal truth. the fine penned words linger on my tongue

    warm light and love
    Robert


    • LadyLavender gold member
      June 5, 2008
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      Thank you for the beautiful comment, and for adding me on as a favorite. Wow, I feel honored.


  • Lsh-x
    April 22, 2008

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    FANTASTIC!! I LOVE IT!

    This is amazing, Powerful and beautiful.
    Especially:
    'Resting in the embrace -
    pulsation of unending
    emotions - released
    to a dream that lives
    in the here and now...'

    Keep writing, your a natural

    Lauraa x


  • secberm
    April 20, 2008
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    Well done, poetess. Write on. One.

    Dez


  • Swangrnv gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    very beautiful

    and so here I come to lay, comfort is to my form-fitting, lost unto the world for love has me surely
    smitten... sorry it came to me and I had to see what it looked like outside of my mind. l.o.l. don't hurt me1 l.o.l. This was a great write and the judge must've been asleep when judging because this looks like an award winner to me!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 19, 2008

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    awww this has a nice relaxing feeling to it, so sweet, and beautiful
    good luck and thanks for entering
    takecare
    stephanie =)


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 19, 2008

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    yes..you are quite true and quite wsonderful while narrating the scenario of the love which is just amazing indeed...well done...

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