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The tulips smile

Missing image
Pretty flowers
bend across the veil
of seduction

peeking
through magenta lids
that blink in our room

cradled
in a lullaby of dreams
softly reaching symphonic notes

as I fold within your touch

the air thins
from the intensity of your love
and I'm falling

into a coma of desire...

Author notes

2)"I could die in your arms, and not be dead" Stephanie Wood

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    aaawwwww this is so beautiful
    wonderful write and goodluck
    take care
    stephanie =)


  • Candy6
    April 18, 2008
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    Nice. Pansies does smile but I don't know about the tulip.


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    April 18, 2008

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    Oh I love this! I really feel the love when I read it Great poem!