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Hell is...

Hell is not being able to bring his smile back for him.

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  • Blooming Poet
    May 2, 2008

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    That would be hell. I hate it when people are sad, it hurts me to see people hurt, because I know I have been there also.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    Awww a horrid thing to watch, a loved one unhappy. Especially when you can't do anything, I can really relate to this. All the best in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    Aww.. that's so true! It is torturous when we see a loved one going through pain and knowing we can't take that from them or give them back the joy until they've worked through it....


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    This is such a lovely write. Although it is only one line, you have said something so profound here. Well done and best of luck for the contest.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    April 18, 2008
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    Aw, this is sweet, best of luck in the contest dear.


    Love and peace always,
    mj.


  • Cannonsfire
    April 18, 2008

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    Oh Cin I am sure the minute he sees you, he couldn't help but smile

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