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The End Of Life As I Know It

everyone
      makes mistakes
      screws up
      doses something they regret
I never
      should have kissed him
      bite him like that
      touched him
she was
      right there
      so close
      found out
I wish
      I could go back
      I could change what I did
      change what happened         
so now
    Im paying
    Im praying
    Im hoping

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  • City-of-Angels
    July 5, 2008

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    'so now
    Im paying
    Im praying
    Im hoping"

    ^^nice ending. It kinda makes you wonder what happend ya know? Nice poem thanks for entering and good luck!