I listen to his heartbeat
it plays my favorite song
I listen to him breathe
I try to sing along
As he wraps his arms around me
I feel his body warm
I feel he's there to protect me
to fight off any swarm
I play with his hair
he luaghs a little
I play with his hands
strumming them like a fiddle
He smiles
It warms my face like a tropical sun
Oh, I wish this would never end
Then it's over
I wish i was back again
Even a mile seems to far
and my happiness put back in a jar
As my heart beats on
it trys to play his song
in a while it will learn the best
just forget the rest
We are together again
Amen!
A contest entry
- Saying "I Love You" for the first time... by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended April 21, 2008, 13 entries
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good first work?
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Yes, I was typing so fast i spelled laugh wrong. Whoops
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It reminds me of one of my favorite songs. I love it! Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Welcome to allpoetry
Lovely. Good expression of emotion. I think the flow might be improved if this was seperated into stanzas otherwise a very good first write.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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a simplistic utterance of your adoration for this guy you love,
and the ache to be together again
each tine you are parted, the teasing play of companionship unfolding, the natural sounds and senses of two in love, captivated by his flesh, heartbeat, respiration, all a delight, a work of heart for you to study and wonder at as you finger-paint smiles on his face. Great write, check your spelling on laugh- thanks for your entry. Please post your AP name in the authors box as reqeusted.~~~Artis
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Nice job.
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YAY
go lizzie!!!
ive already told u bout the poem
awsome!
btw, erins name is erinpart
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