By Christopher E. Rangel
8/03/07
How your precious face haunts with porcelain perfection
seeping into my thoughts becoming an obsession
primitive instincts guiding my intentions
as i approach trusting my intuition
close so close to me
i see you in my dreams
posing just for me
a portrait of beauty
flowers are blooming in your hair
leaving your petals everywhere
an angel with hidden wings so fair
I don't need to see them to know theyre there
Maybe one day I will have you
Maybe one day you'll be mine
Oh baby you don't know how badly I need you
To hold until the end of time
Author notes
Song i wrote with an R&B feel.
A contest entry
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really pretty... it would make a great song and I'd love to hear the music. thank you for entering.
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wow! this is pretty good...i soooooooo would love to hear the music for it!
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In the line "as i approach trusting my intuition" I misread trust as thrust, I'm not going to lie.
Good portrayal of the mix of primitive want and emotional need.
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haha
yeah thats hilarious, maybe in the next verse...
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this is a very beautiful song, id love to hear how its sung too so i can see the real experience of this wonderful piece, excellent job
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thank you
I will eventually have the song produced...actually working on another CD now...
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awww I love this and the music with it is going to make it better good job!
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Oh My Goose!
I fucking loved this oen too Chris. You certainly have talent, and I wish you the best of luck with your musical talents. This was really pretty, powerful images. I'd like to see more like this from you1 It certainly is most...wow.
Mell = Speechless!
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i really loved this. it is sweet and caring and full of love. i would love to here the music to this song. maybe one day it will be a number one hit. keep up the writing!
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thank you
haha maybe one day. im in a punk band my brother write too and sings most if you want to listen to OLD stuff www.myspace.com/decentatbest
new stuff recording now, not this one yet though
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