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Pineapple Streams



 

 


seeping into my thoughts
a life, I once knew,
it may not mean anything to you,
...but to me...pierces through,

spoken thoughts
and day dreams,

past, present and future,
I can't help but wonder...

distant memories,
-unmade-

yet...
...oh so vivid

and oh God, it's...
it's... so beautiful

golden-rod, daisies
pineapple streams
and rainbow bright-

summer nights outside
under-cover-
moon light-
star bright-

rain drop kisses and
tear drop pearls

heart beats testified,
two as one,

you are you,
and
I am me

together equals

~We~


 



 

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I have noooooooo idea folks....

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  • Symphony
    February 12

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    Reading the title, I had no idea what to expect - and i don't think i could have ever suspected that this would be revealed within the poem -

    I found myself going back to read it twice more, having been a little unsure as to how to interpret after the first reading and while i haven't reached a final conclusion yet, I want to say that the imagery here is beautiful -

    particularly the mention of raindrop kisses and tearful pearls - lovely tender wordings there!

    Great job, thank you for entering


  • Stardust-luvr
    December 30, 2008

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    i love it and i must admit tears stream too well done and many blessings always xxxsuperb job dear Sis!! xx


  • InMyFlames
    June 21, 2008

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    you went over the line limit i have no choice but to remove you, feel free to enter in the contest im opening up after this one has been judged


  • Erozay
    May 7, 2008
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    oh i loved it it was uniqe

  • EmeraldDaze
    May 4, 2008

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    Cool

    I have to admit that from the title I expected something...different. Though I'm still not sure what it means, I like it. It flows well, and reminds me of a few songs by The Beatles(it brings to mind Lucy in the Sky With Diamonds and I am the Walrus in case you wondered).


  • Lionsloves Lair
    April 28, 2008
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    Thanks for posting this in the Lair

    3 claps=9 points


  • Lauren Noir
    April 26, 2008

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    the title interested me! It has to be one of the best I've ever read!
    I enjoyed this, the little snippets of beautiful lines contructed together made a very tasty poem

    I enjoyed it very much so!

    Well done


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    There are some gorgeous lines in this write, which caused my imagination to whirl with inspiration...sometimes we can just write beauty in words without pondering and no explanation...a delightful read sis

    Much love ~Sis


  • michellemybelle gold member
    April 21, 2008

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    HI Sis,
    I love this. It is so cheerful, colorful and ofcourse, full of love. Great imagery! You amaze me with that heart and pen of yours!
    love ya
    Michelle


  • penman gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    Excellent

    Oh my this is so wonderfully done. A great creation so touching and special. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    Sis...this is beautiful, heartfelt and so happy..

    Love you

    Simon


    • StarEyes
      April 19, 2008
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      Thanks my brother. I still am trying to figure out how I came up with this one


  • Arkbear gold member
    April 19, 2008

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    My dear Neice ~

    You have just penned the best write I have ever read of yours ~

     

    I actually had goosebumps after reading these beautiful words ~

     

    The emotion in this is incredible.....the powerful tug at heartstrings is amazing!

    The Title is befitting indeed ~

    The lasting impression is one which leaves its' mark upon my mind ~

     

    The format which you used, captures the feeling you had while penning this.....soooo well done.....and once again, I can't believe this is not in a contest!

     

    Grrrr ~

     

    Uncle Bear is so very proud of you......I've missed reading your lovely words,

     

    Uncle Bear ~

     

    • StarEyes
      April 19, 2008
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      Thanks Uncle Bear! That means a lot coming from you. I was not sure when I finished this one, some of the lines were just out of this world I guess I will look for a contest for it


      and love

      Nyetta


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    April 19, 2008

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    This piece could not have gotten any better

    " summer nights outside
    under-cover-
    moon light-
    star bright-

    rain drop kisses and
    tear drop pearls ".

    OMG ~~~ I just love this piece.
    You have done an excellent job...

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always.
    Joyce


  • Swtpoetryman
    April 18, 2008

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    WHO KNOWS WHERE A POEM COMES FROM - AS I FREQUENTLY SURPRISE MYSELF WITH WHAT I OFTEN COME UP WITH.

    Pineapple streams,
    and tangerine dreams,
    beneath blueberry skies,
    and a sweet angel's eyes,
    sounds divine to me,
    filled with serenity,
    and a watermelon kiss,
    from a butterfly of bliss,
    on a golden spring day
    miles away from the whiteness,
    and brightness of winter.

    A fine piece - to say the least -Sunshine Girl - that fit your AP name to a T - if you ask me - with a few rhymes thrown into the mix - heart and soul and nostalgic emotions! I enjoy 'this one', immensely, Darling.
    Love & Piece.
    Earl


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    April 18, 2008
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    Very prettily done.


  • Mistress Masquerade
    April 18, 2008

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    this is an amazing work full of vivid language and great imagery. it helps us understand your emotions and i loved it.


  • Mrs. Mautino
    April 18, 2008

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    pineapple, eh? does that represent the symbol for "welcome"? Personally, I really enjoyed this one. I found that you used a lot of imagery in this one and that gave me a clearer thought as to the feelings you put into this. but now, sadly, i'm in the mood for some fruit


  • Desire gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    Beauty!!!

    Holy Moly!!
    I just Love this one and the background to compliment

    The emotions drip from Your words!!
    Woooooooooooo Hooooooooooooo
    Just Precious!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    All I can say is.... Beautiful.

    & love
    Linda

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