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consumed in waves of elegance

this melding of shores awash
within clasped sands of hourglass falling
gently into rhythm of pulsating beats
serenading sleep's compulsion in dreaming
tomorrow's yesterday beckoning this embrace
holding forever immovable of tasting
flesh of peach's soft sweetness dribbling
over lips seeking the fire melting
caramel sensations upon the palette where
yearning is consumed in waves of elegance
when time moves forward to feel your breath

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option 1... pic credit:By kastavnn on Flickr

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  • Tam
    April 22, 2008

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    wow...

    the final line is KILLER...
    when time moves forward to feel your breath
    THAT is poetry...and beautiful poetry at that!
    congrats on the HM but I'm stunned this isn't wearing gold...
    excellent penning!
    love, Tammy
    xoxoxo


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    awww wonderful poem
    it read quickly
    and was sooo beautiful
    great take on the pic and good luck
    take care
    stephanie =)