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Unable to bleed

Hell is the tender flesh surrounding a thorn,
and captured drops of held crimson stillborn.

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Hell is __

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 23, 2008

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    This is brillent. You took a simple fill in the blank that is one sentance and made it something poetic and very well penned. Thanks so much for entering.


  • Tattboyspet
    April 21, 2008

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    wonderfully explained (in my view anyway!)
    you didn't need the second line ... the first one captured the thought exquisitely