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It Hurts to

Breathe
wake up
look around
live

know that i trusted you
know that i gave my heart to you
know that you don't even care

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Alianne Llewellyn

just writing for the contest

A contest entry

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 21, 2008

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    Thats a lot of pain to be feeling. I think we all have been here. you trust someone, they break your heart and then act like they did nothing at all. i=I.