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Travelling Windows

Staring out the window
Objects begin to move
Trees race from side to side
Houses with fences disappear
Clack, click,sway
Mind runs blank

Newspaper Mornings
Don't read my paper
What cha lookin at
slinky smiles
Morning chatter
Almost Reflections

Cars at crossings
Bells and sirens
Birds in dull skies
Factory chimneys
Station warning
Open doors to alight

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  • TheRoughDraft
    April 19, 2008

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    I really like this.
    'Newspaper Mornings' and 'Factory Chimneys' are some of my favourite images in the vast amount! I love how you've crammed so much imagery in such a small amount of work. Quite emotive and familiar,