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If only

If Only....
I could believe that I was something worth loving..

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AngelFlower
If Only________

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 21, 2008

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    Its a good feeling when that if only is filled, but when its not I know quite well it hurts quite a lot. Thanks for entering.


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    's you ARE worth loving!!! and i can relate to this short but powerful piece soo much!

    your cousin loves you!

  • deepheart
    April 19, 2008

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    There is nothing I can say that hasn't bee said already. Again a great job packing so much feeling in a few words.


  • Amana Araya Jabari
    April 19, 2008
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    Very short, its a great question but I almost felt as if you wanted to go on.


    • Angelflower
      April 19, 2008
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      Yeah I might go on with it later.. after the contest.. not sure though..


  • CinematicInk
    April 19, 2008
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    A great contest entry!

    You are something worth loving!


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 19, 2008

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    WONDERFUL!!!!

    I feel we all feel this way about ourselves at times but we all are worth it! Yes, each and everyone of us! 's


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    if it's any consolation.....

    I love and adore u sweetie! You are a wonderful daughter and friend to me and I treasure you lots, Daddy

  • almostgone
    April 18, 2008

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    You know you are always worth loving....(or else i wouldnt spend the majority of my shift messaging you)lol. Good luck in the contest!


  • Lsh-x
    April 18, 2008

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    Awww, You know what this is probably one of the shortest poems i have seen so far, but i think it is also one of the most touching poems too!
    You are someone worth loving, there is someone out there for you sweetie! Don't let any jerks make you feel differently! It should be more like:
    If Only
    All these guys would stop asking for my number! Hehe.

    Nice work, I'll be checking out some of your other poems and commenting for sure!

    Laura!


  • buffsab99
    April 18, 2008
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    Emotional

    You are so meone worth loving my friend.


  • Kelli Marie
    April 18, 2008

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    If only you could....because you are. Everyone is. This is a very nice fill in the blank. Good luck.
    Kelli

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