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B.U.S.

Buses carry lots. Unmistakable colors and smells. Sad people thinking their sad songs.

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Check the first letter of each "sentence." I understand that the second one isn't technically a sentence, but I still want it to be 0 lines.

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  • TheRoughDraft
    April 19, 2008

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    original! And i like how you made it short
    It actually says a lot for only three sentances, nicely done.


  • ever so slightly
    April 18, 2008
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    It really like how vague this is yet I happen to think the same thing every time I'm on a bus.