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Without You

Without you it still hurts,
but only when I breathe

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This is for the contest, my ap name is Moondamp-Roses

A contest entry

Please let me know what you think. Thankyou xx

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 21, 2008

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    This remidns me of the Shania Twain song, It Only Hurts When I am Breathing. I like it and your take on the prompt.


  • eternal-nightmares13
    April 20, 2008
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    pretty good for the fill in the blank!!
    so short yet somehow very emotion filled!


  • Moondamp-Roses
    April 18, 2008
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    Hello Kelli Marie, Thankyou so much for your very kind words. I do appreciate them as I wasn't quite sure about it but your kind words have settled my doubts. Thankyou again. All my very best wishes from Rose xx


  • Kelli Marie
    April 18, 2008

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    A very nice finish to the fill in the blank. Very well done. good luck in the contest. I like it.
    Kelli